Lust Chapter 27 Completed

I wrote chapter 27 earlier today. One chapter short of my goal.  Chapter 27 went pass my minimum word count of 1,250 words for a 50,000 word novel.

This chapter is narrated by Amber Clearwater. The scene is set in a church in Bordentown. The intent of the chapter is to see how Amber, Gabby, and Leon are all reacting to the events in Chapter 25. Eventually they will decide on what to do next.

This is one of four scenes that compose the “Dark Night of the Soul” from the  Save the Cat methodology.

Writing the chapter was pretty fast once I started. Amber’s chapters (formerly known as Shantel) are averaging around 1500 words. Trying to keep her personality and motivations consistent is more challenging than the other characters.

I feel I accomplished the goals of the intent and that the characters all feel genuine. I didn’t focus too much on powers with this chapter as it is a reflection. I also have the challenge of making the reflection sound different than Chapter 26.

Overall, I’m happy and can see the finishing line.  You can check out Leon’s redesign concept and lore here. For Gabriella redesign concept and lore click here. Amber redesign concept and lore will be coming soon.

Sketch 28/30: Gabriella Torres

Favor of Ares Lore: Gabriella Torres

A man hath no better thing under the sun, then to eat, and to drink and to be merry. The duty of a caretaker is to provide nourishment, both physically , spiritually, and mentally and Gabby takes this role for the team.  However, taking on the problems of others can drive her to drink her problems away and with her allergies she mishandles her medicine.  When the ghost of their dead from comes for help she wants


092819_gabbyto help him because she feels responsible for not protecting him and wants to help him and her friends. What will she do when it becomes too much and GLUTTONY calls her for a drink, when the allergies demand medication, or when loneliness needs food? With her psychic ability to manipulate the weather, Gabriella will storm into action for her friends. Follow Gabriella in the upcoming novel and comic Favor of Ares.

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Sketch 26/30: Samuel Delgado

Favor of Ares Lore: What is one suppose to do when logic fails?That never happens in the eyes of the team’s most observant member Sammy, as he acts as the team’s scientist. Sam can be lazy, bored,,and generally unmotivated which causes him to isolate himself from others. When the ghost of their dead friend ask for help in finding his killer, Sam joins the group out of a sense of responsibility to help his friends and to use his skills. However is that enough for him to overcome SLOTH, when all he rather do is focus on details, facts, and science? With his ability to shrink  himself, others, and objects  there is no problem too big for Sam. Follow Sam in the upcoming novel and comic Favor of Ares.

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